Monday, 27 August 2007

Featured Page: & Critical Evaluations by two independent referees:

This error was generated when I was trying to show the Product Price on the Featured Page as it only shows Product Name and Brief Description.

Error:

Microsoft VBScript runtime error '800a0009'

Subscript out of range: '[number: 4]'

/phr004/coursework1/Featured.asp, line 52

Resolved the issue by finding the error in the code as shown below:

<%

FOR i = 0 TO topFeatured - 1 STEP skip

offset = RND * ( skip - 1 )

productID = featuredArray( 0, i + offset )

productPicture = featuredArray( 1, i + offset )

productName = featuredArray( 2, i + offset )

productBriefDesc = featuredArray( 3, i + offset )

productPrice = featuredArray( 4, i + offset )

%>

<% IF productPicture <> "?????" THEN %>

"

HSPACE=5 VSPACE=5 BORDER=0 align="center">

<% END IF %>

">

<%=productName%>


<%=productBriefDesc%>


£<%=productPrice%>


Evaluation 1: By Tenzin Choekyi, Toronto, Canada 15/09/2008

Your website is fairly quick to download, I checked in both Internet explorer and firefox. It looks fine in the Mozzilla firefox but in the Internet Explorer, I noticed that one of the lines from the header sections comes out from the rest of the page and that the search and categories section looks out of order.

Browsing through the product looks fine however I find product image bit small and that there is no product price being shown, which I believe is most important from the buyers point of view.

Your layout is plain and simple; I suggest it could be made more stylish with glossy or trendy buttons, having rollover effect etc, which would be more user- friendly.

Fonts are bit small and distinction between the headings and plain text paragraphs are less obvious, which I should suggest you make more contrasting and eye catching.

Keywords with the main page and other pages are fine but may be you could add one or more appropriate keywords i.e. safety, children, happy, play and games etc.

The rest looks fine and I wish you good luck.

Evaluation 2: By Tenzin Rangdol, Tibet Society UK, 28/08/2008

Phurbu la,

As far as i m concerned there are few areas that needs to be changed for your attractive website and they are as follow:

a) Toys need to be eye catching as they are not clear enough. I feel if you can create button to make it enlarge or if u can create a button to have separate window for the object to be seen in enlarged, then its quite better i feel so....

b) I feel your site need to be much animated to attract the visitors. Table borders of the header links are coming out and it doesn’t look good.

c) My account icon on the top need to be activated. It takes time to load the logo picture.

d) As there are few visitors who just want to register rather not have idea buying anything from your store, thus I feel it’s better if u can separately for registering rather than making registration in a check out side.
e) If you have a page or a paragraph introducing your company would be helpful.

f) Links are not user friendly, I didn’t like the red color for the link and underline for all the links. If the under line comes on the rollover and rollover color will be great.

These are areas where i feel of need of modification. But as a whole i should definitely say its really very nice attempt and i truly appreciate ur effort. Good luck and hope to have colorful result.......


Thank you both Tenzin Choekyi and Tenzin Rangdol for their evaluations.

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